wow...i honestly do not know what to say. this poem is absolutely amazing! it really blew me away, wonderful job!

That was beautiful. I can't express in the right words to tell you how amazing this poem was. You did such an outstanding job with it. Your imagry and diction is impecable. The poem flows with such a brilliant technique. It left me breathless, and speechless. Simply amazing.

BEAUTIFUL!!

Another disturbing and thought-provoking poem. Working in social service, this poem connotes far too many images of child abuse for comfort, but the message is distinct and powerful. So as much as the subject matter brings pain, your ability to write and evoke emotion is clearly gifted.

Wow....that's all I can say! I am speechless. I'm not sure what to say to express how wonderful this piece is! Just....wow! Take care~Holly

oh, how you make me mourn, not for you...you are so gifted, so dark,a nd so amazing...i love your poetry, i wish so badly i could meet the crature that brought these amazing words life...any one can put words together and make them go and write a poem, but only certain people can move and create drama with words, you can fill life and truly intensify situtaions with your poetry...
lee nicole

Wow, this is so emotional... and so touching. I love how you wrote in the form of a music box, and the story you've captured is just so vivid. Wonderful work!

wow that was amazing, keep up the great work

There is great expectations on the poems I read from you; and this one certainly does not dissapoint me!
The meaning was beautiful, the graphics you created were frightening and gruesome. I could feel fear for this girl, and bitter anger. And I completely loved the twist; this girl did not sink to his level, and did not kill him. That gives this poem such immense power; a very different twist that I didn't expect.
The symbol of the music box was well written; you portrayed its perspective very well. It was an interesting sight, like we were viewing this from an inanimate objects point of view.
Very dark, and full of fantasy beauty.

Well Done! 5/5 definetely!
Though, once again I found a minor error:
"one night she had enough, to scared to breathe"
'to scared' should be 'too scared'.
:-)