by Andrea
wow... |
by Kevin
This is some simple and pure stuff Mr man....i've had some experience with self harm...it must have been hard for you to write this huh?....check out my poem "Wholeness"...it's about the same subject.. |
by Sarah
Gre8 flow, deep emotion...keep writing! Gave this a 5! Bravo!! |
This is a great poem. simply yet very deep. i like how you begin and ended it the same way. keep up the great work. tc. xmollyxx |
... Excellent. |
by loznal
THAT IS EXCELLENT POEM WELL DONE |
by !*!Zoe!*!
It's pretty good....I like the two "Nothings" in a row...its gives it a nice flow... |
by Kris Lynn
Very good poem. It touched me...and there aren't alot of poems that do that. Keep em coming. |
i loved it |
by candy
that was so simple...but so incredibly amazing. that has to be one of the most amazing things ive ever read. i totally knwo how ya feel, as ive written quite a few about the same thing. anyways, i dont even have words good enough for that poem. absolutley insanely awesome!! keep writing, cus yur awesome |
by Lenee.Roca
that poem was awesome..nice job..i can relate to it! |
Wow, another incredible this, this one I can relate to quite well...so well described, you have amazing talent. I hope you continue writing, and I hope things get well for you...xxxxx |
by Noelle k.
sad poem, but true... most of the time that is. okay well anyway....... great poem 5 |