very good *thumbs up* :)

One great poem very emotional, Really liked it :)

this poem just grabbed me from the very first line. great piece. keep on writing! take care:)

i want u here another day....

Beautiful Poem...Keep writing...take care...FIVE>>>

Another great one, a very well written poem which was just great

Great poem! you are very talented, and i really enjoy reading your poems. your writing is beautiful.
always,
brittany

OH WOW!!! This was really amazing and deep, and VERY, VERY beautiful!!!
sweet poem!!! ur a great writer!!!

that was really nice. I thinkwe all have angels, but its nice to know you don't ignore her.
-MoniquE

Wow...this is really powerful. Your words flow really great too. I hope I can see more poems like this one!!

=)
.:jOy:.

Yes, very beautiful poem! And it's different from so many other poems that I know, I don't think that I either have read one before about a gaurdian Angel. Keep up the good work!

wow-storytelling? this had me leaning
into the monitor as if to hear the voices
-(not cynically speaking either)-i was
literally leaning an ear to the computer
screen-i guess artists get to visual.

Great poem.. I really liked it.. It was very creative.. Perfect... Keep it up.. You have a lot of talent.. hope i can read more...
Angel

Nice poem, and thanks for checking out incubus. Could you pass a comment for whiter shade of pale? It's about my friend, and I'm gonna ask her to check it out in a few weeks...

i like that you dedicated this to someone who loves you and takes care of you and referred to them as your 'guardian angel'. it sounds like a mother or sister to me? either way good job.

GOOD ONE

Excellent poem! Keep it up and take care!

i like it, i wish someone would say that to me while being tucked in bed, nice job!

wow, so surreal and magical, like not gay magical, like intese fantasy, but real...ah sh!it, i give up! nice job!

amazing poem!havent heard frm you in awhile! i hope you are getting better and life is falling into place! keep in touch
lexi lou