this is really sweet!! aww...

please if u get a chance read and comment mine!! thanks!!

Awesome poem! You did a really great job of getting your emotions across. I am going to check out some of your other works but this is definately an A+. Hope you continue writing! Please check out some of mine as well. Thank you

whoa, great work, i loved it

i wish there was even 1 person at my school that thought like that........
cheerio

AWWW. This is sooo sweet and beautifully written. What a lucky girl she is to have found a boy who goes for inner beauty. xmollyxx

not fair!! there really needs to be more guys like you!!! i loved the poem keep up to good writing and check out my work! yay!