Thoughtless

by SplitSided   Oct 12, 2004


It all started with your smile.
After that it took me awhile.
all of my thoughts are cluttering.
when i talk to you my words start stuttering.
it's from the way that i feel.
i can't tell if this is a dream or if it's real.
you come into the room my mouth drops to the floor.
that's it i can't take it anymore.
i have to tell you what i think.
as i grow closer my heart starts to sink.
another guy walks up and gives you a kiss...
from here i lost my total sense of bliss.
you crushed me to a point where i'm thoughtless...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    That was well wriiten loved it!

  • 20 years ago

    by hilary

    i loved ur poem i like it a lot ur good at this!

  • 20 years ago

    by hilary

    this is hilary i am glad u liked my "the true meaning of love" poem i wrote it about a year agao wen i was upset and wen i play music i can write very fluently so i decided to put it on the internet kit my s/n is tineebubbly or llamalovaxo09

  • 20 years ago

    by SilentAngel

    I didnt realize you had that side to you. keep it up, i always knew you had potental.

  • 20 years ago

    by SplitSided

    i'm not 1 to judge...but it sucks i wanna see something better next time

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