great work! i love this poem! you are getting better and better and at a year younger your talent has already surpassed mine! wow! i hope your grandparents are better!
Lexi Lou

Very nice poem, congrats! Keep up the good work !

i love this poem! it leaves you with a feeling of awe and amazement. peaceful poem for a peaceful way of life ( i read ur veg. posts) i would love to talk to you sometime!!1 kissmyphil .. thats my aim sn.. thanks for posting such lovely poetry.

inna