You seem to improve so much with each poem....I personally like poems that has a descriptions of the clouds in it b'coz clouds seems to go so well with our feelings...Once again a great write and never stop writing...Take care and keep smiling....FIVE>>>

it was good but I found myself stumbling over the flow of the work but the message held true good job fo rthat take care and I got more poems posted check it out

wow, excellent poem hun! i absolutely loved it! keep it up and take care!