sorry for the loss my dear friend...be strong...take care...FIVE>>>

^no wrong imagination, please,
i've lost noone - it just came up to my mind today, so i wrote it down

I am pretty sure you are sick of comments that just seem to flatter you in hope that you ill rite a good comment for them so i wont bore you. This poem for some reason appeals to me...The differnce in stanza lenghths...the non existent rhyme scheme...the emotion that seems to be numbed lends this poem diabolic nature...so that it seems the rantings of an evil man who has lost his last string with good rather than a lost love...

this is wat i think...this is my interpretation

hm, really interesting, why do you think so?
this is not what i intented, maybe i should work on it
please tell my why do you think the focus is on that man and why he should be evil?

That was beautiful how you expressed your feelings. Suicide does happen a lot these days and the population that has tried to commit suicide is very large. Good poem!

THis was a very good poem. I know what you mean by a suicide poem just coming to you. It's intersting the way it works.
xxZoexx

Awww... I'm so sorry about your loss (if in fact this poem is true). It's so horrible when people think they have to end their lives... once again, I'm sorry. This was a very heart-felt poem. Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

weird how some of our darkess thoughts can be thrown down a piece of paper and felt so real yet infact there just a figment of our own imagination. Great Poem Nef, i gave you a 4. I thought it had a great message but i found the layout a bit distracting. I hope i don't offend you. I really enjoyed it though, can't wait to read some more.

This is lovely but sad to know. Keep writing.