What should have been

by Idiosyncratic   Oct 12, 2004


Life should have been
A simple journey
The smallest things
Should make us grin

But what we have created
Makes us too hard to please
And to each other we are hated
It has caught like a disease

It started with just one
Deciding the other was wrong
But then the other disagreed
And brought everyone along

A brilliant sunset
Used to be enough
But now, what makes you happy
Is nothing but stuff

Love, just a little
Should render us delighted
But now it is brittle
And will not survive

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  • 19 years ago

    by Poppy

    true!!! soo true sadly.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    Wow! this poem was right on! it was si dope! i loved it! wow! ya right i wish i was half as good as you are!
    Lexi Lou