Freaking amazing poem! You have some true, exceptional talent! Much, MUCH better than a lotta stuff I read today! What a refreshing thing..
Good job on your first dark poem :) It was a success.

awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

Great poem as usual but i got two querries...

1> How come almost every poem has the word crimson in it...

2>Shud this not be in the love category...it really isnt that dark

ok......... i did comment on this brilliant poem but it has strangely dissapeared. Anyways, i'm once again amazed at the depth of your poems and how beautifull written they are. you get better which every poem you write. i really like this. its very unique and reminds me of a poem (well more like a short story that rhymes) called "the highway man." if you ever get a chance, type it in google and read it. i think you'll enjoy it, i know i certainly did. tc xmollyxx

i like this... it was kewll... maybe sometime you could look at some of mine and tell me what you think... keep writing

I love this poem..it had a lot of meaning behind it.
I agree with tasteless though, not so dark however it had a cold feeling to it

Loved this so much the darkness is really moving :)