Refuse To Let Go Of You Too .

by FireCracker   Oct 13, 2004


You were it; You were my everything; You were all I could ever want and before I met you I was constantly on the guy hunt

Wonderful qualities you posses helps erg the fact I like you so much And Until I met you I never knew that great of a guy existed I never believed in such

Being with you is so amazing.
Like a lifetime only dreamt about
While thinking about you I blush and my body gets cold chills through-out

Your truthfulness keeps you so real and down the earth. Such a great guy you are and a girl to treat you any less then perfect has not a clue what you're really worth

You are my world; To me you mean so much just because you're you
I've already let many meaningful things slip I refuse to let go of you too

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  • 20 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    i liked your poem and the thought was definately there...i could tell that you had something that you just had to tell someone.

    That being said though, your grammer isn't the best in the stanza's *not that i am one to bug people about grammer* i am in no means insulting you, i just wish to offer some constructive critism. I think that your a very talented person and i enjoy your poems as you have most likely already read about.

    Very good poem...thank you for the compliment on mine, i really appreciate any feedback i get from any of my poems.

  • 20 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    ITS GOOD WHEN I SEE A RED NUMBER NEXT TO YOUR NAME IN MY FAVS LIST , ITS ALWAYS A GOOD READ ... THANKS FOR SHARING THIS ONE ...

  • 20 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Oh sweety he means soooo much to you and you can just tell from the level of emotions expressed in this poem! Well done another great from you my friend :o)
    Much Luv your fan Eirisa

  • 20 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    great poem! you are very talented! keep in touch!
    lexi lou

  • 20 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Who is this guy inspiring such great poems? Hmmn! I imagine the butterflies churning in your tummy all the time. Great to share those meaningful intimate thoughts. Great work.
    Thanx for the comment, i appreciate.

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