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by RayRay Oct 13, 2004 category : Sadness, depression / about death
A troubled young man. Standing with a gun in his hand. He was in the street, with teers streaming down his face. Cops have circled the place. It was a pitch black night. All he could see in his sad eyes were flashing blury lights. A cop yelled out, "please son tell me whats bothering you." But from the look in the young mans eyes the officer already new. With a gun pointed to his head. The young man said. You wanna know whats botthering me? Do you want me to let you in my life? Do you truly want to see? Im tired sir, im sick of the pain. I tried sir, but my life will never change. I want a family. I want one that always loves me. I want them to be the ones here now. Telling me to put the gun down. I need a dad to be around. I need a mom to love me when im feeling down. I want a brother to play basketball with me , no matter whos the winner. I want grand parents who cook sunday dinners. Can you do that..Can you do that for me? Im just sick of being lonley..... With teers in his eyes,the officer said \"no son i cant..im..im..sorry.\" And with a loud bang and a flash of a light. The lonley young man ended his life that night.-please comment and vote-
by RayRay
Thanks brotha
by Decayed
This is devastating.. Good Job!
by Nicholas
Hey man, You have some serious talent. Last night i wanted to say and do the same as the kid in your poem. Thanx, you really helped me. Check out mine... It's called "Too Late"