Comments : Haiku #3

  • 20 years ago

    by Lance Hardy

    Lightning? Nice btw

  • 20 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    awesome haiku! i love 'em. i like the words too! take care:)

  • 20 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    This left in cringing after the first line and by the end of it, i was on the floor in a fetile position. In other words, it was really good, lol. I have my interpretations, but would like to hear your own meaning.
    Aken Sol

  • 20 years ago

    by Rebecca Lynn

    Very cool & beautiful! I hope your eyes are okay ;)