Forever in love

by paddy   Oct 13, 2004


I wrote you're name in the sky
but the wind blew it away
i wrote you're name in the sand
but the sea washed it away
i wrote you're name in my heart
and forever it will stay
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this is from a friend of mine called Lisa she's a very talented young person who has a great talent for writing but yet to realize it so please say what you think maybe she'll believe you lot more than me thanks lorns
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  • 19 years ago

    by bluehun

    hey there you do still come out to play then lol.hows you ,thanks for ya comments on me poem lol.still feel it might be out of date,fancy letting me practice just to see if i need to add any more thoughts mmmmmmoreeeee.lol,email soon yeah

  • 19 years ago

    by paddy

    hey everyone long time sorry i havent been on alot lately i have loads of new poems when i get a chance i'll type them up
    take care all
    and blue hun i love ya lol
    xxxx
    lorna

  • 19 years ago

    by paddy

    hey everyone long time sorry i havent been on alot lately i have loads of new poems when i get a chance i'll type them up
    take care all
    and blue hun i love ya lol
    xxxx
    lorna

  • 20 years ago

    by bluehun

    nice 1,hi remember me,im the 1 you let get away lol.oh well.hows you hope ur keeping well.tell ya m8 i like this very much.

  • 20 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    hey remember me? havent heaqrd from ya in awhile! but its so nice to see you are still on! arghh i missed you! tell your friend it is awesome! loved it!

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