Helping hand

by Sinister Soire   Oct 13, 2004


In a land of burning sand
A tear is like an ocean
In a land of frozen ice
A flame is like a blaze

In a land of stifling heat
A breeze is like a gale
In a land of drenching force
A tree is like a sunny day

In a land of blowing chaos
A rock is like a ten foot wall
In a land of shifting rocks
A stable hand is all that’s needed

copyright 2004 © Logan Brown

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  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    really deep, loved it

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    thank you sooo much

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    i love it also...brilliant hun, so deeeeeep (there's never the proper words to describe how I feel about your work) I love it...so incredible...just phenomenal hun...xxxx <33

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCareBabyxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Georgi

    omg i love this so much, wow tht is so gd. rly deep. wow.

  • 20 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    comments are also greatly appreciated

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