by PAUL HEWSON Oct 13, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
In the fading windows to your soul |
by Lipton
Your words seem to hit me really hard. I can relate to this a lot, because it seems that these words have ran through my head once before. Keep writing! |
by Mustardhart
Great ryhme, beautiful rythm and excellent choice of words and expression. I identify with those same emotions. Great work!!!!! |
by Lillian
I read this the other day, but it hit me on the personal side, so I didnt (couldnt) comment. It is beautiful, if not heartbreaking.. I love your style. |
i agree that the opening lines were reaaaally great, it kinda made me think wow lol. Its really pretty but really sad *sighs* it was really good! :) keep them coming, beanxx |
by Amy
Wow. Amazing poem. Such beautiful and descriptive words. Fantastic work |