by Hannah
OMG, well done, that made me cry, im in the same boat as u if thats all tru, |
lotsa emotions sealed inside... i say this deserve the best score... =) ish why i gave it a 5 =) liked it... i felt some of em before, i no wanna go back coz i know how hard to deal with the pain... and it hurts, it stings... sometimes it leaves a mark that years wont help em fade away... all i got ish em memories that kept on bloking my sight... again thanx for sharing this, hope u pass by mine sometimes... much love |
by katelyn
WOW! that was one of the best poems i've ever read.. i know how you feel throghout most of .. its like you took my feelings and put them in a poem! if you ever want to talk my e-mail is tigers0309@hotmail.com..keep up the great writing!!! |
by Abbie
Wow that was amazing! i usually get distracted with long poems but this one kept me glued to the screen thoughout! i can relate to quite a few of the things you said and i like the message in the last sentence! |
by Erika
that is a really great poem and honestly i have been through some of the things that your talkin bout but keep on writing your really talent and dont let nobody else tell you different |
by FireCracker
AWESOME JOB ! ! WAY TO GO ! |
all i can say is i so can relate to this. (ive been raped 3 times) i no how u feel...this is a great poem!! |
this was.... overly amazing. it was the best poem i have probly ever heard. no words can really decribe how i felt it was SO FREAKING GREAT. it totally realates to me. YOU ARE ON MY FAVORITES. |
by Natalie84
Wow, this poem just sucked me in. I was mad that it was over...lol....I wanted to keep reading. Awesome poem!!! I'm going to some more of yours..... |
by Joann
this was a really good poem...im sorry...if you ever need anyone to talk to ill be here....even though you dont know me but i will help you ok...well i loved it--and keep up the good work ok...talk to you later...Joann |
by Elynnka
That sent shivers down my spine... I love it; it's a very powerful write and so full of emotion... I don't know what else to say except that it's amazing. Keep writing and stay strong *hugs* |
by Danny
I have when i saw this poem and started laughing. mwahahahahaha. Ive seen better poetry in shakespeare. |
by Laura-Emily
Congrats, an amazing, heart felt poem. |
by abi
U jus described my life |
THIS POEM HAS BEEN OUT 4AWHILE, BUT I BARLEY FOUND IT. |
by Niinaa
This is an amazing poem it brought such emotion .... it was breathtaking it covered so much aspects of pain and shame... and if all these stuff happened to u ... then im glad your holdin on strong cuz it takes guts,,, also this reminds me of a poem i know but yours is sooo much better ... keep it up yur amazing Hun |
Wow this was awsome. |
by kookie
Yes, yes i have not every single bit but most of it. its hard, to sit here and pretend that o'm okay this poem makes me cry and im not sure if i'll stop. the best poem i've ever read. i want to say its all okay that time will heal you, but it wont. your never really fixed you justt learn to hide it better. it just goes to show me i'm really not alone good luck in life kid |