I love this. i've never read anything from the prospective of the person given the second chance so this is really refreshing. its true, life's just not fair. another great write jacki. xmollyxx

I liked the way you structured it and the wording was good but as for being not fair I think if you look further into the bigger picture you may understand people do things by thier choice not yours you learned where they failed so really it not just unfair its life and life is never fair it's just life go figure well good read take care and will be looking out for more of your work
read Ominous Fate I think you would like it .