Unnamed 001

by erotema   Oct 13, 2004


Oh, Fate, with sordid spirit brings my pain
that Time, though everlasting, cannot quell.
my lonesome state is rightly my own bane,
and, deep inside, my soul has gone to hell.

but who decides that sadness is so wrong?
this foul detritus of my wretched soul--
i feel uplifted in my tortured song,
and lucid humour does my spirit toll.

oh, yet my discord has its way in you.
my heart, though burden'd so, in you finds glee.
in grace and love my soul is born anew--
my pain is mute in true love's guarantee

and if return to pain shall prove my flaw,
then love shall die and i will breath not draw.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    well written

  • 19 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    loved it xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    very good =) well done!! keep it up.. I voted a 5! hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    another wonderful sonnet. Keep up the astonishing work. 5/5.

  • 20 years ago

    by Nefarius

    this is really good styled, i know what hard work it is
    it is a very good sonnet in shakespearean form
    and that you have to read "my wretched soul" like "my wretchid soul" - is just beautiful - i like this old form
    i can only repeat me, it is really, really good - i would give you 6 points if i can ;)