by Unseen Exposure Oct 14, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
This poem comes from a deep place in my heart, so if you have the time, please comment. |
by Lucy
amazing, you pue this together so damn well, it came from the heart and came out amazing, what a way with words... |
by pinkalias
wow....you have done it again. this poem is amazing. i love how you told a story of a girl who is shunned from soceity because she does not meet the world's expectations. And i love how you wrote that she was described as being a savage, it really portrays how she was an outcast and exiled from the world. fantastic job...really.amazing. keep it up |
by Broken
OH MY GOSH! That was BEAUTIFUL! It really does sound like it came from deep inside your heart. I loved it. I could picture every word. And it really did touch my heart... that sounds really corney but it really got me thining about some people ... Awesome job! I envy your talent. Seriously, I do hope that you find your light.... |