by Eminent Bard
Yes..these words are very true... |
by Brittany C
I liked this poem. The wording is good and it flowed ok. It was easy to read and understand. But, I do not like the structure of the first stanza. Maybe make lines shorter in all of the stanzas. It would help improve the flow. |
by Dave
Great work, really hit home to what I've been feeling lately, good job! |
by Jess
Wow, Another Effortless Poem. |
by NobodyKnowsItButMe
So sad to hear that it happened to you...! |