Comments : Rejection

  • 13 years ago

    by Eminent Bard

    Yes..these words are very true...
    keep on believing HE would soon give you the one HE created just for you!! =)
    very nice poem!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked this poem. The wording is good and it flowed ok. It was easy to read and understand. But, I do not like the structure of the first stanza. Maybe make lines shorter in all of the stanzas. It would help improve the flow.

    Gave it a 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Dave

    Great work, really hit home to what I've been feeling lately, good job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Jess

    Wow, Another Effortless Poem.

    Wonderfully Written.
    I Do Say You Have Quite The Vocabulary.
    :)
    God Bless
    Jay.

  • 12 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    So sad to hear that it happened to you...!
    Anyway, wonderful poem...more like a story though...!