by juss an allycat Oct 14, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Hey Mom, I love you but I need you to know |
Noemi, Dayla, Haley, Elizabeth, Maria and Christina thanx a bunch 4 taking the time 2 read my work!! it really means alot, and it makes me happi 2no people enjoy reading my stuff. 2 those of u hu asked i'll definately check out your work! take care guyz! |
by SHYSTY23KO
Very great. This is a good way to express those kind of feelings and this piece is one that people can relate too. I think it is great! ***** |
Lexi Lou, Danielle and Chris, thank you so much 4 ur comments, they made me feel really good! Reading the comments on my poetry brings a smile to my face, so thanx a much. love you all -Lizzy |
by Danielle
That poem is so beautiful... Wow... The wording was great... So nice job, and I'm So So So Incredibly happy for you 'n your mother, that is such a great thing that your relationship is changing... i wish I coudl say the same for my mom but I can't... lol... So hats off to you :-) Keep writing, you have a great talent... |
by Lexi Lou
awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch! |