Beautiful poem...The way u showed ur emotions towards your mother and contradicted them with your destination was awesome....Keep writing....Take care...FIVE>>>

Hey Kumar, Thanx 4 the encouraging comment! I realised I had to be more respectful towards my mother and I decided to put it into words! thanx!

That was a superbly written and well expressed poem, Alysse. So thoughtful and heartfelt! It is great that you made the decision to use your writing talent to try and bridge the gap with your Mom. Good luck in following your dreams. And when you do arrive at your goal, please don’t forget to send me a backstage pass. :-)

wow! you are very brave and i love how you put in the i love you section! be strong! this poem is amazing and gave me shivers! keep in touch!
lexi lou

You're right, I don't know you, but coming from a girl who never thought her mom would get sick w/ cancer...don't take TODAY for granted, SHOW HER THE POEM! She'll love it and it may bring you closer!! I loved this, gave it a 5! Bravo!!

Sarah

This is truely a beautiful poem :) I don't know you that well yet but Im very glad that you are making a big stip towards getting close to your mum :) I think this is such a nice poem and you should really show it to your mum. You know, someone has to make the first step :) Take care.

*blushes* oh wow, you really think its gud? it took me a while but im glad. i ill show it to my mom, when the time is right but we are chinese and im not too sure if she will understand it entirely. it started out me writing a poem about being overprotected but its spiralled into so much more, which is great! i dont mean to lie, but im not 14, i am only 13, i lyk to 'enhance' my age. but thanx a bunch everybody!

Harald 'n' Casey, thanx so much 4 leaving comments, i luuuurve feedbak, gud or bad as long as people repond it makes my day! thanx guyz, ur so sweet :o)

awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

That poem is so beautiful... Wow... The wording was great... So nice job, and I'm So So So Incredibly happy for you 'n your mother, that is such a great thing that your relationship is changing... i wish I coudl say the same for my mom but I can't... lol... So hats off to you :-) Keep writing, you have a great talent...

Lexi Lou, Danielle and Chris, thank you so much 4 ur comments, they made me feel really good! Reading the comments on my poetry brings a smile to my face, so thanx a much. love you all -Lizzy

Very great. This is a good way to express those kind of feelings and this piece is one that people can relate too. I think it is great! *****

Noemi, Dayla, Haley, Elizabeth, Maria and Christina thanx a bunch 4 taking the time 2 read my work!! it really means alot, and it makes me happi 2no people enjoy reading my stuff. 2 those of u hu asked i'll definately check out your work! take care guyz!