Brilliant poem as usual, Christina, but this one especially struck a chord with me. I wonder about silly little things like this myself. I noticed that when you read it out loud (I was alone at the time!) it has a great rythym to it, even though - or perhaps because- it's halfway between poetry and prose. It seems to me that the less structure you give your poems, the better they flow; like the Shining Moment, I think it was called. But then again, what would I know? Again, a great little piece. By the by, if you're interested, I've got some new poems posted. Oh crap, I've rambled. Anway, keep it up.
Matt

oh crap, I spelt rhythm incorrectly. And the poem I meant was The Ultimate Moment. Oh well, again, an interesting poem.