I'm so glad I took the time to read this poem. It gave me chills as I was reading it. The detailed picture you paint for the reader is indescribable. The emotion behind every single word is impecable, just amazing. The poem takes an unexpected turn at the end, with the death of her creator and she finally gains life. Its such a touching story, and a brilliantly portrayed story. I absolutely love reading your poetry. Its such inspiration in my own work, and it's so deep and insightful. You have an amazing talent that many of us wish for. Excellent Job.

this poem gave me goosebumps! it was truly amazing! you have a gift beyond your years, or anyones for that matter. keep in touch
lexi lou

wow! that was an incredible piece of writing. i would never have thought of that concept. it was deliciously chilling and dark... i wanted to read more and more of it after each sentence. excellent poem. take care:)

i have no idea why you had a 4.4 i thought this was well worth a 5!!! I was so glad I read it. This kicks my dark poetry right in the ass lol....This was chilling with great visuals that deplicted the scenes. Great Job

Terribly and beautifully disturbing. Once again, great imagery woven within an engaging tale. I love your poetry!

wow!, nice work! you are very excellent on descriptive work and show nice talent in deepness. most of my poems are also deep check em out. I think you rated one of mine i forget which one it was. anyways nice work :)

A startling, vivid hell. You're able to paint quite a picture until horror has become a beginning instead of a means to an end.
How I would describe this would be a terror based from the ultimate despair.
I was both repulsed and staggered by these words and in the end I can only say this...you are a true artist ;)

Great Poem!!! This is amazing and so entrancing! I love every flow of the words! They haunt my mind tugging on my vision so I can read this amazing poem! Every minute of it caught my attention! Keep up the great work!

Love, Taylor

*gawks with eyes wide open* holy moley that was the best dark poem I've ever read! Your words are enticing, dark and highly chilling, the first few lines definetely captivated me.
Very long poem, but you kept my attention well, I could picture a dark chilling night, and a gruesome doll slowly coming to life. Giving the readers imaginary is a GREAT thing in my opinion.
I will NEVER forget reading this poem- it's a definete 5 from me, very well written and highly talented. I feel very honoured everytime you have commented on my poems, especially from such a true talented poet like yourself.

Only one little thing...
"your still choking, begging for air" 'your' should you 'you're'. ;)
GREAT work!