Nice :) short and sweet ;) But to me, somehow it doesnt sound finished when I read it... I would advise some modification on the last stenza :) but hey, its a good poem anyway, keep it up :)

This poem has got some awesome imagery. From Mountains to the Ocean side...what an array...excluding the hill side. haha im so korni3. ;D

Omg, This is so Beautiful, the words just come together so well and it creates an amazing poem! Excellent writting..Two thumbs up!:o)
Shannon