A muffled killing spree

by ANDREA   Oct 15, 2004


Her life is a drain
Her identity’s spiraling down
It’s as if she doesn’t notice it
But he's pushing her without a sound

He’s murdering her slowly
It’s a muffled killing spree
He’s a silent criminal
Yet his hands are completely clean

Her hands are blood stained
Yet he’s the demented mind
He pushed her to her breaking point
And no one recognized the signs

She was once happy
She enjoyed her life
And then she met “the man of her dreams”
Who only caused her strife

Now her poisoned blood is dripping down the drain
His hand is holding the knife
Its presses against her throat
Yet she’s the one who took her life

*****PLEASE COMMENT********

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by son of the devil

    nice poem great details and all

  • 20 years ago

    by Lucy

    i get it, i really do understand it, its intense and deep and makes tou have to think and go back and read it again and again, thats a good thing...you did a really well job...
    "His hand is holding the knife
    Its presses against her throat
    Yet she’s the one who took her life"
    thats my favorite part...so emotional and thoughout
    Lee