Early Death

by brittany   Oct 15, 2004


A seductive lure led by misleading words
The hunter meets his huntee.
Awkward words followed by bone chilling silence.
She knows it’s the end.
The corner of the alley is now their whole world.
Pleas and cries bouncing off the walls, cutting the silence of the night.
Shedding tears of blood, the final blow comes.
Unheard screams become echoes then fade into nothingness.
Only silence and crickets chirping. The perfect crime committed.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Michael

    I know this is my second time writing here but I just have to say the more I read your poems the more I like them. You have a very nice vocabulary and the way you use your words so perfectly makes you a very good writer. Write some more!! I really enjoy reading them!

  • 20 years ago

    by Michael

    Wow, I really like that one. Good job, keep up the good work.