nice poem...i like the ending a lot....i can kinda relate.
thx 4 ure comment on my poem:-)

wow, that's a really smart, psychological poem, you stated the situation really clearly. I don't know if it has enough emotion though... but who am I to comment? cool poems, keep writing! :)

I love this. This is beautiful!!!!!
Great work

wow that seems so sureal its exactly the same way i feel about a friend of mine but just couldnt find the words to explain it and put it to him. youve done a great job keep it up

abby xxxx

This was deep - and very well written
i don't know what to do
it seems hopeless to forgive
but i want to do whats right
so i can be proud of the way i live

Those are my favourite lines but all together you have done a wonderful job expressing your feelings/doubts in this piece you should be very proud!

Luv Eirisa xxoox