Hey Alicia! There were a few things as far as spelling that you could have fixed but overall I thought it was a really great poem. I am kind of going through the same thing right now where I really want to be with someone but they don't want to be with me. It is a really tough situation to be in and even tougher to describe. I think you did a really good job of expressing yourself and making other people understand how you feel. I gave it a 5 and I'm adding you to my Favorites list. Keep up the good work!