Nice, I wish I was over the girl I've been in love with for 3 1/2 years and she just denied my love.. heh

I am so giving her this poem once I'm finally over her!! Nice job!

great poem, shows a lot of things To stand up for yourslef, and find not just a pretty face, but someone true to u! Grat job!

i love it!!! i know exactly what you were going through...been there, done that. im glad that you finally did realize that this guy's probably an @** like the rest of them. keep up the great work!!

alwayz,
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wonderful poem!!

i love your poem its like wut happened to him and me and i got over him in the end but it took a long time. he hurt me but i hurt him too. neways keep up the good work!!! luv always!!!
~yolande~

this is really good! the exact same thing happened to me! i hope you really are over him cuz i know it can be hard! well good luck and great poem

I can so relate to this poem, wish i thought of it. Keep writing chic your a good poet!

that too has happened to me. the guy dumped me once for another girl, only to have sex with her. then i took him back, gave him my virginity only to have him dump me again. that was for the better because i did exactly what you did, you told him off. you go girl! never take sh!t from anyone and i mean that.

OMG. this was so so so so so so so good..no i mean great. this was nicely written and i hope you keep it up. just a suggestion, put it in the love catergory. (againg just a suggestion, i don't want to be a critic)

I can relate to this poem. It is very well written. Keep it up! :)

wow i am in the same situation! this is beautiful! xoxo