Wow, omg, i felt the emotion, the tension, it was really good this poem! I really liked it the way it flowed everything!

She'll call 911 and tell them I'm dead
Her carpets are stained such a beautiful red: dont you love the color of your own blood, dont die...just be depressed and smile a lot...thats a really good poem, i usually dont critique cause i dont feel its my place, but i think you should write more...its really good, but it sucked when it ended...good poem...Lee nicole

That's really, really great, sad, but fantastic..