Help with life ==== pass the knife

by Tamila Bob   Oct 16, 2004


Today is a day
I will be here
Tomorrow
But not for long
I mean even superman dies
And I'm not even superwomen
My hamster will die
Souls will die
Hopes will die
And dreams will too
Once you realize they are not
For me and you
You will age
You will sag
Your hot boyfriend
Will stop to brag
No more cutie
Your kinda fat
And no one will go
Out with you like that
Your life is sad
You look so distort
Why do you care
If you look hot

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  • 19 years ago

    by It Itty

    Good job--and hopefully it will make more ex-anorexics to wonder. Great job and concept....Although, the title doesn't really make sense to me, but it's rare when they do.

    God Bless

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Awesome poem, I agree with lexi too, except I wasn't anorexic. Hey... Keep up the good work..

  • 19 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    i liek the last stanza and it is a good question...awesome poem and causes and ex anorexic like me to wonder....keep in touch lexi lou

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