And you got on me for writing a sad poem! ;) Anywho, this is really good! Keep it up!

Brilliant ... this poem conveys so much emotion. Excellent Job.

I like it . It reminds me of what I've been through but I didn't play your part.

I know a song that is like that except it talks about dinkng their pain away, and inthe end the woman kills herself. Its an awful song, but your poem was alot better . Even though it was still sad.