Comments : Grow A Pair

  • 20 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Well written, beautifully expressesd. Good work

  • 19 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    Love the ending. Like the way you get into the mind more, but in truth I am not really one for love poems. Maybe it is because there are too many. The only ones I like to read are Poems about love that get into teh psychology of people after losing love--like The Raven. But the poem was good. Good rhyme scheme again. Your rhymes never sound forced that is good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    This one was very powerful to me..
    A lot of people can relate to the feelings that are being expressed, of someone who says one thing but then listens to another.
    "Grow a pair" is the right phrase, when will people just follow their hearts instead of following others opinions?
    Excellent piece!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aw beautifully penned! well done! flow was good and oh yeah i love your originality! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This one didn't quite seem up to your usual word choice, I mean most of it was pretty simple, but that worked here, really, the simplicty of the words was covered well by the power of the emtions. Another great job, another great read, keep up the good work Robert.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marcus

    Good poem
    It is crazy how guys play girls like that
    but that's the type of guy the girl always ends up choosing

  • 17 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Your emotion is this poem is outstanding i lov it.

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Honestly, I don't like this one. I can't see real emotions in it, rhyming seem forced and flow is off in some lines. My suggestion is that you should work one some unique metaphors and original ways for expressing your feelings. You don't have to listen to me, that's just my opinion and this is your poetry.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This shows a painful story of love and influence friends have on their own friends. It's hard when you have such strong feelings for someone and their friends don't like you etc. This line seemed a bit hard to read for me, because it had two 'said's;
    'You stammered and said, they were right in what they said,'
    but other than that, this would be the best penned poem yet. Well done.

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by JustKristina

    This one shows ultimate feelings and emotions. The rhyming seem forced and i didn't like the structrure again. i'm sorry. but it was pretty good other wise.. :0]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh how I loved that ending...so intense and powerful and filled with such bitterness and annoyance..

    I think this was wonderfully written, the emotion in this was beautifully displayed, as was the imagery and the flow was good throughout the entire piece.

    I particularly enjoyed the feelings of hopelessness and confusion mixed with the anger at the end, I thought that made for a powerful transistion.

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I am beginning to see your style emerge from yourp oems now, i really love the way your sentences are quite long and are declaratifves sentectes giving facts xxx alex xxx