Make The World Bleed

by Robert   Oct 16, 2004


Head on the ground and body in the air,
I sit here and watch and stare.
We are going out once again, to another land,
and I am to stay stout in his very hand.
My master’s head held high with no regret,
for the foes we do not fret.
Blood clings to me every time we return,
and with each battle my Master’s wife waits with concern.
I am ground to a sharp blade on either side,
disemboweling my foes and tossing out their insides.
With one hit I can crack a mans skull with no real skill,
then come back to a last hit to make the final kill.
Flesh flying too and fro,
hitting everyone with an ongoing blow.
No one is given mercy as I carve my way to the end,
for in this blood lust I see only enemy not friend.
No weapon will ever hit the one that holds me,
for in this battle for life I am the only thing that will set him free.
A tight grip and off we go,
and soon another head is lobbed off of another foe.
They may spill a lot of blood or a little here and there,
but it is just that they are dead, that we really care.
Carnage bodies, blood from to another day, we fight,
and I will do my best to kill everything in sight.
I will be sharpened again and again all long as I am in need,
for I am his weapon of choice made to make the world bleed.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2004

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Man the imergery in this one was vivid. I too felt like I was on a battlefield. Your flow was great, It didn't seem off to me, and the personaiftion you gave to the weapon, was a little diffrent. Nice twist, there. You did another excellent job 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by None

    well, I am seeing the same small problem in your poems,it can be easily fixed though...not all of the rhyming pairs match up evenly...like, one line will be 10 sylables,and the next 7...it kind of throws off the flow of the poem...when you write, try and think it out,sound it out, and write it out...that is what I do,I sometimes talk to myself to see if the lines go well with eachother.

    this line was sick to read:

    I am ground to a sharp blade on either side,
    disemboweling my foes and tossing out their insides.

    very descriptive,made me feel like I was in a war field reaty to die.

  • 19 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    i love the detail!! and it was so....wow....i loved it.....really enjoyed reading it too!! 5/5!!

  • 19 years ago

    by erikka baby

    This poem was so dark and had a lot of details put into it. I loved the concept though. Your a very talented writer. xX

  • 19 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    wow you capture the reader with the first words