Excellent!!! Definately a FIVE!!!!!

nice one there Robert. Liked it alot.

5/5 pretty good

You use of bringing to life this lethal and inanimate object is amazing. What a great approach to writing. Very good work.

i love the vocab used in this, wonderful

great poem! i love it! vivid imagery and an even flow! really beautiful! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

I love the way you described things. It was very good, I love it! It deserves a five!
Keep it up and thx for ur comment on mine it meant alot *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

A nice rythm flows throughout this piece of poetry, which is always a bonus to the reader.

Keep Writing
Nici

wow you capture the reader with the first words

This poem was so dark and had a lot of details put into it. I loved the concept though. Your a very talented writer. xX

i love the detail!! and it was so....wow....i loved it.....really enjoyed reading it too!! 5/5!!

well, I am seeing the same small problem in your poems,it can be easily fixed though...not all of the rhyming pairs match up evenly...like, one line will be 10 sylables,and the next 7...it kind of throws off the flow of the poem...when you write, try and think it out,sound it out, and write it out...that is what I do,I sometimes talk to myself to see if the lines go well with eachother.

this line was sick to read:

I am ground to a sharp blade on either side,
disemboweling my foes and tossing out their insides.

very descriptive,made me feel like I was in a war field reaty to die.

Man the imergery in this one was vivid. I too felt like I was on a battlefield. Your flow was great, It didn't seem off to me, and the personaiftion you gave to the weapon, was a little diffrent. Nice twist, there. You did another excellent job 5/5