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by goot Oct 16, 2004 category : Internet slang / sadness
So many friends Such support, such love Help for my downs Love for my hates. But what do i deserve? Why do i recieve such love? Who is pretending? Am i a deserver? I look around Gifts and friends None of which is deserved Love that is un-returned I feel so dirty But what do i deserve? Why do i recieve such love? Who is pretending? Am i a deserver? I see the one i dream of His cold heart flickers At my face He turns away from me Rejected by death What have i done? But what do i deserve? Why do i recieve such love? Who is pretending? Am i a deserver? I have no respect Yet i am I take them for granted Un love them But what do i deserve? Why do i recieve such love? Who is pretending? Am i a deserver? So i close my eyes on life Lift myself to death I love every friend My soul is filthy I hate my burned life But what do i deserve? Why do i recieve such love? Who is pretending? Am i a deserver? So i deserve nothing of which i posess I return the love now I accept none Forget me now But hold onto those deservees Of which i am not.
by yup
A beautiful piece. Truely spectacular. You deserve nothing but the best. Keep up the superb work, Lots of love ~Kelly
by Charlene
Nice poem, theres a lot of emotion behind it, well written, keep it up. CHARLENE @