No Single Tear

by La Muse Angelique   Oct 16, 2004


You
You where have you gone?
I remember you
You were the girl with the red shoes on
You are dead now
I've cried
Did you hear?

I heard a voice
Not clear enough to hear the pain
Her shoes are lost in the dark
All there is left are blood spots on the floor
If I will follow them, will I get to see some more?

Yes
There she is
Like an oasis
Lying on the floor
Crying and screaming

"Mommy please no more!"

Her face is turning blue and red
The blood and the knife is all there is left
Mom is gone and has no regret
A cold and cruel person
Who should be dead

The girls shoes are still there
Not dancing like they once did
And not as white as they first were
But still there..
RED
Darker then ever, glancing in the moonlight

"Mommy did love me she was just confused, she got mad because for once I didn't clean my shoes"

Mom was drunk and got a knife
3 stabs were only needed to kill an innocent life
She only should have raised her voice
Now the girl is dead, has no idea
Now she tells me more..

"Mommy mommy it's so cold, haunting memories are the ones you told!"

I heard her whispering with a cold breeze surrounding her

"I didn't want to hurt you
Like you once hurt me
So now I say goodbye with no single tear"

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  • 14 years ago

    by Madison

    Amazingly creepy, loved it

  • 15 years ago

    by XxCutSoDeepxX

    Omg this poem is really sad and emoional its really excellent keep up the great work please read my poems and tell me how you think

  • 17 years ago

    by MeeyCie

    I didnt get it? it was a bit counfused. well, there I go for not be so good at english ;)
    But I liked it anyway. I like the sad ones. It makes me want to cry and I like to cry for things that is not my fault like Im bullied. well, you are a good writer :)

    xoxo Meey

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow. The story you told here was captivating. I was hooked from the beginning and curious to know what happens next. It was deep, emotional and everything a dark poem should be. It was unique and interesting and I enjoyed it very much.

    One mistake I found was
    "Your dead now"
    I think you mean "you're"

    Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    This poem is really nice!!
    It was well written and well expressed!!!
    Super sad, i liked it alot!!
    Uhm.. The flow wasnt that good but it ws still an awesome poem!!
    Keep up the gr8 work!!
    A well deserved 5!!!
    =)