by TrUtH hUrTs Oct 16, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Drifting through a crystal sea, |
by Teria
ASGDLSGD. |
by Sweet lig
I love the titled its sounds very interesting and it flowed well |
by Nici
The imagery in this piece works really well, as I felt myself drawn into the picture by your use of descriptive language. |
by greenmunky
good poem. i liked it a lot |
by NannO
wow.. i lyk this poem.. its reli gud, especially that u use those "big words" lol.. ur rhyme was perfect.. gud goin |