Friggin Awesome...I mean really wow!!

Have to read that again....

Very good. I loved the way it was written and how the words flowed perfectly. Keep it up.
~*~Christina~*~

Wow! That is all I can say. You write so beautifully! Excellent poem.

WOW WOW WOW. brilliant poem, it blew me away. i can see your fury, confusion and pain all at the same time and i get the feeling that you felt lost. WOW. Great write. tc. xmollyxx

WoW! Awesome Poem!

that was very depressing ! but i really felt ur pian thru the lines and i hope that u have healed and i hope to see ur submmiting more bright poems .. but this one was very well written ...

sad but as beautiful as sad can be.
if that makes any sense!lol
luv it!
blarg

that was soooo beautiful! i really liked it and i relate yo how you are feeling, though i guess a lot of people say that. but newayz... that was great!

wow, another great poem! i love the entire thing... great work!

Your poems are very good! Keep it up!!

Blinded by the mist of negativity.
Awesome.

Great job with expressing emotions in the poem sweety I liked it a lot....Excellent, Keep up the good work doll!!!! Much Love, JJ

Yet again you have succesfully painted a wonderous picture in my mind. I quite enjoyed the way you emphasized "lie" with mendacious. Some may have found it redundant, but I think it served its' purpose quite well.
Take care, Aaron

Lovely.

great poem!! keep it up!! :)

Excellent just EXCELLENT! You give perfect metaphors a new meaning! Keep it up!!! All the way!!!
luv kt

Wow! You are a wonderful poet!

wow It really makes you feel...wow thats all i can say is wow wow wow haha
Love Always,
Angel

A good use of descritive words and imagery. I loved this poem. It flowed really nicely, and was written well. Very moving. 'Deep' for want of a better word. Kudos.

Wow Exellent Job loved it!