Again... great poem, written in your unique way. I'm running out of words of praise to give you. You're definetely one of my favourite authors on this site.

Wow!! Great job!!! Your a great writer. Keep it up. If you have any tips for me let me now. I'd appreciate it. And thanks for the comment

I really liked this poem. it had a good flow to it. and delicuosly dark. keep it up

Wow. Very different but excellent job. I love the way it is put together.

p.s. you have been on my favorites list ever since I read the first 2 you asked me to read. =]

5/5