*Blinks back tears* that was... beautiful, extremely sad. Your title made me interested, and I am so glad I read it. At first I didn't understand what the poem was about. But honestly... well done, you've written an amazing poem.

it was really good how did you come up with it wow!!

i loved it keep it up u r so good at writing......it was sooooo sad it made me cry

i loved that poem. the magic of your poetry has touched many people. WELL DONE

thanks so much to everyone. that means alot, and i was just thinking and thought of it

wow...that was powerful! i'm still trying not to cry...i loved it....i hope that this isn't how u want everything to end....just keep you head up ... remember: your life is what you make it

OH WOW!! that was absolutley...i dont even think there;s a word..That was honostley one of the best i've heard in a while! i mean it was so sad yet so good!! You did such a wonderful job..i hope you never do such a thing no matter how hard life is! But yet i dont know you situation all i can do is tell you how great of a poet you are!! This just shocked the crap out of me!! OK well i'm done babbling on ..once again..terrific job!! Much love,
~Chelsey~

Im crying
Worth a five easily
I wont say too much to take away from this poem but it blew me away!

OMG! That is MARVELLOUS! If you could give me any tips on writing, it would be GREATLY Appreciated! KEEP UP THE MARVELLOUS WORK *5*

It was very beautiful .. made me htink of my bro who i lost thru suicide .. great poem very touching

this is soooooo good! keep up the good work!

thank you sooo much!!

i know he cannot hear me
but i whisper "i love you so
its time to say goodbye
I'm gone, now let me go"

i honestly love that stance. it almost brought me to tears. the whole thing was beautiful and i liked how there was a twist in the middle of it. i love that you told a story of a girl commiting suicde and her watching the effect it had on her loved ones. great job,

thank you sooo much. i love getting commetns, and please...feel free to send me a personal message, i would love to hear from all of you

wow that is great i have to keep myself from crying as i am in school keep it cant wait to read more -krystal

I'd have to say the best one i've read on this website so far..very very nice

thank you all so much. keep the comments comin!! lol.

this is such a good poem but really sad
good job

that was amasing!

thanks