DAMN! that made me wanna cry. Your an excellent poet so keep writing

thnx

thanks everyone for writing

it meant a lot to me

please keep commmenting

and remember that i would love to get personal messages too, and whether or not i respond to them(and i susually do) i do get them, read them, and appreciate them

Wow, I dont know what to say what hasn't already been said about this poem. It definatley is amazing work!!! Very good job! GREAT job!! just wow!!! Extremely good!! Thank you for sharing it with us!!!!
take care
luv elizabeth

i know he cannot hear me
but i whisper "i love you so
its time to say goodbye
I'm gone, now let me go"

I love that stanza.

This is an amazing poem, I love the story line, it made it an interesting read. Excellent job. Yet, so sad.

very powerful but so sad

omg that was so sad it made me cry i loved it! it was so beautiful, keep up the good work:)

thanks

LOVE IT

thank you

omg that is soooo good.ur a very good writer...

thanks

Hey..That Poem Was Great..I Actually Got A lot of poems just like that in my profile..K well bye

Wow!

This poem was so freaking sad...I almost cried myself...It was a great poem...I felt like I was in the story that was being told...You are a great writer with an excelllent talent...Good work on this one...I give you a 5!!!...chows 4 now...Jennie

wow, that brought tears to my eyes...my boyfriend commited suicide recently, very moving. You are a very talented writer, your rhyming really flows. Keep up the good work, and God Bless

i understand this poem because i have a cousin who cuts herself and im afrid that one day its going to go to far