Nicely written :) good choice of words, this poem flows really well, I like it :) as to the response of your post in the forum... if you want to get lots of people to read your poem, you'll need to read lots of other ppl's poems too and leave them comments and votes ;) sometimes ppl will return the favor by reading your poems.... take care :D

Wow. I really liked this poem.. it was put together so well and the flow was excellent!!! =) Thank you for comment, it really meant a lot to me. I look forward to reading more of your poems soon! :) Take care and keep writing!

Happy Holidays! =)

I really love this poem! Ur and awesome writer and im always excitied to read what u have.Dont lose that talent and keep it up!!

Oooo. nice. That's an interesting way of putting things... never quite thought about it that way. Anyway, keep it up!

~Ciao Lipton