Beautiful. Great rhyming, not forced at all. In the second stanza i loved the lines, "Me, alone in the ocean.
You, never going beyond the shore." Lovely metaphor. Well done.

An excellent poem! I loved it! Keep it up and take care girl! :)

that was a excellent poem i loved it thats how i felt but i took the chance and told my friend how i felt but right now we are still just friends but thank god nothing has changed in our friendship.