by Ashmore Oct 17, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I wont be an artist |
by Kevin
Very impressive I have to say. Filled with feeling, which is what most poems seem to lack nowadays. The reader has to be able to feel the emotion being emitted from the words. I definitely felt it, good job. I wrote a poem about hope, or at least tried to, haha. Perhaps that might make you feel better. Take care ;-) |
by Luvmeluvr
I really like this poem, it seems thought out and well written. I would love it if you would read mine and tell me what you think. Nice job! :-) |
by Amy
WOW! So amazing!! The comparisons were fantastic. Sad but beautiful words Jess. Great work |
Awwwwww Jessica, Don't be silent. Remeber your voice can make a difference in this world. And rember I'm always here for ya sweetie. |