THAT IS SO INCREDIBLY SAD :(:(:(!! poor hunnie :(:( *hugs* I hope everything goes alright..I bet he's watching over you and I bet he's proud of you and loves you too...This poem was so moving and touching and powerful...and wondrous...amazing job chloe...best of luck to you sweetie...xxx |
This was a sad, great poem. Its seems like he was a great friend and im sure he's up there watching over you and saying be strong and great job. Awesome job. |
For the first time on this site, I had tears in my eyes as I read your poem. I am so sorry for your loss and I can't imagine what I would do if I lost my best friend. You did an awesome job.. you really did. |
by Mustardhart
So sorry for the loss. Hope you find strength in his thoughts and the times once shared. |
by SHYSTY23KO
wow! That is pure talent! I can't believe some one could write a poem so good, i really can't. I still have tears coming out my eyes. No poem has ever made me cry so hard. I'm really sorry you lost your friend, it happens to the best of use but i hope you move on and live a very happy life. That is a very beautiful poem. VERY beautiful. Keep writing, i'm very interested! |
by Brittany
that poem was so beautiful. it brought tears to my eyes. I am so sorry for your loss. you showed your emotion so wonderfully. great job. plz comment on mine. |
by Elise
This poem, is the best poem I ever read in my life...Its powerful, full of emotions and is just...so amazing..wow, i'm crying right now, WOW ! Thank you. |
by Raven Lynn
wow this poem definetly blew me away...i recently had a friend die and i didnt knowhow i was ever going to believe it...then i read your poem and it helped me accept it...thank you so much! your definetly one of my favorite poets on this site! |
by alexander
HOW CAN SOMONE WRITE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM MY GOD WRITE BOOKS PLEASE CAUSE YOU ARE BLESSED YOU ARE GREAT YOU MADE ME VCRY FOR 10 MINUTES THIS POEM TOOK MY BREATHE AWAY iT`S SOOOO SAD BUT SOOOOO PERFECT . THEY SHOULD MAKE ONE WORD FOR THIS POEM CAUSE THERE DOES NOT EXIST ONE BETTER THAN PERFECT AND BETTER THAN MARVELOUS .ITS JUST SOO PERFECT AND I FEEL SO SORRY FOR YOU GOS BLESS YOU AND PETER CONGRATS ON THE POEM IT WAS PERFECT AND I LOVED READING IT |
Im really sorry to hear this hunni, it seems like only a few weeks ago you sent me that message about him. I really feel for you and my heart goes out to you. please keep going and remember that im here whenever if you feel you need to talk again.... "just keep goin 'till it all stops flowing"... I know you can do it!! |
by Jessy
omg omg omg i love this poem god you are so good how do you become so good!!! this is really sad tho:'( but i love it <33 |
by Red Charm
Totally BEAUTIFUL and so sad. Please check out some of mine and comment |
by FireCracker
Gr8 job on this one hun, i loved it , it was so well written, AWESOME WORK AND WAY TO GO .. ! lol .. check out my new works .. lol I miss hearin from ya and I love ya to death ! .. ! |
by Abzy
Woah....ur so amazing! U deserve alot of friends like Peter, and Im sure ull get many offers. Id be ur friend, and so wud many others who read ur poems....good luck in the future, ill continue to read and enjoy ya poems. Abz xx |
I loved the theme and idea of being a letter, its full of emotion n ur got gr8 talent. im sorry 4 ur loss take care x x x |
by NearlyCrazy6
Dude, i think this is one of the best poems ive read, its so sad :( im gonna cry |