by Eibutsina
Hey Lexi Lou - thanks for checking out and commenting on my poem would luv you to look at some more if you have time :o) This was great there was so much truth and realism in every line and i really loved your appreciation of your own life in that last stanza - wonderful work im off to read more luv eirisa xxoo |
by Mustardhart
I have always said, you write with a heart. This is truly amazing. Thank you for your thoughtfulness!!! |
by Lexi Lou
thank you all! i wrote this poem becuase i read a truly life awaking book called the perks of being a wallflower and it made me think of all the wrong in this world and how lucky i am....so yas |
This was an excellent poem.. FIVE.. keep it up really.. This was awesome and sad... O feel the same way.. I wish i could help everyone.. waht can ya do |
by Natalie84
Well....I'll give it a.....TEN!!!! This was really good. I'm at work and right now I'm trying to keep it together. It made my belly hurt, my eyes water, and it sent chills down my spine. Really it did. I'm going to read some of yours and will be looking for me in the future. This is being sent to my favorites. Good Work Lexi. I'm so happy to know that there are other people out there who care, who think of others and don't complain about the small things in their lives that don't make them happy. You must remember someone out maybe not even far from you has it i worse than you do. It's even in the people who left you comments. You all are good people. I admire people such as yourself Lexi. I am not a creepy person, please don't think that, I am just far from being selfish and self centered and really notice when others are the same. |
by Lipton
Yeah, this was pretty good... I sometimes think about things like that when I think I have it bad. Great job! |