We were ment to be!

by Josiah Larson   Oct 18, 2004


My heart and her heart
was one of a kind
they were meant to be

I never met a girl that could do so much harm
That also had so much charm
I carried her in my arm
I saw her face
then I gave her a Place
Then my dad refused
and I was confused

So i started to run
and I got my own place
then I married that girl
then she had her fun
and moved on

I thought we were one of a kind
but I guess thats not true
I now hate her
and want to kill her
but I still love her
So I'll be good
and let her move on

I still stayed with you
even though
I know what you done
Love is all about taking chances

I still gave you every thing
and I still loved you

I dont care what people think
its not there life
Its MINE

I made a commitment
I made a promise
To stay with you no matter what

My heart is yours
and all ways will be
it can be broke
but then raiment

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    You got these three poems with the simular subject. I was ok, but got kind of stagnent. I thought there was too many then in the poem and I felt raiment could be better of with the use of healed just a thought. Take care...

  • 20 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Thanks
    i started to fix it yesterday I noticed that there was a grammer problem tho.

    Thanks for leaveing your imput=)

  • 20 years ago

    by GirlieLovexx

    hey i like it. its youve shown ur emotions through it well look forward to reading more of ur work

    abby xxxx

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    you've expressed your thoughts very well, Josiah....
    I think if you took time to go back through it and polish it up, it would be an excellent poem! The main thing is that you switched point of view half way through... (referring to the girl as "You" near the end rather than "her" like in the beginning)

    Great start you have here though!

  • 20 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Hey people
    I was really sad when I wrote this poem and didnt really take time to do it neat or any thing... been kinda depress and lazy to do any thing or even care about any thing.
    Thanks for viewing my poem

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